Sunday, September 20, 2009

Ammu's First Written Poem







Ammu wrote a Poem today ... Publishing it as it is ..



Do ignore Gramatics ... Poets freedom :)






The Sun is Shining


I saw the Moon



It was very beautiful


Then I like it



Then I went to the space



Then I saw the Alien



I scared and run



Then the Alien catch me



Then I went to the Aliens home












10 comments:

Ajith Pillai said...

wow!

Jayadev said...

CT

You don't have to make excuses on her behalf. Ammu is the poet and she has the liberty to say what she wants.

It's the age of freedom and wonder - a child can imagine just about anything and everything - as we grow older we reduce our choices, become more rigid and lose our imagination.

Let her mind roam free (sadly Airtel charges ;-)) now.

I like her connect with all of creation - she says that even the alien had good intentions and took her home!
Brilliant!

Deepta said...

Wow! Talk abt a fervent imagination at work!! I wonder what she did in that alien's house..lol!

~moonstruck~ said...

way to go ammoose.....

Ananya said...

wonderful:) sh has a wild imagination...encourage her to reach for the stars..congratulate her on everything that she writes:) iv her my love:)

Deepa Gopal said...

Awsum!!!

She is Imaginative!!
Great start, ammu..

Its so nice when we see our kids on an imaginative journey...which happens many times at my home too..we feel so proud of them:)

Encourage and reinforce her talents.

Ayyappadas said...

The verses from a budding poetess....
As they pour out conquering the space and time,
Castles and space crafts get built and destroyed
Galaxies to magical wands all shrink to one-
A tiny cute speck of thought;
A thing of beauty, a joy for ever.

Jayakrishnan said...

She is creativity. Like someone said creativity is a learning process where both the teacher and student are the same individual. She is exploring it.

Jayakrishnan said...

I meant she is creative.:-)

Unknown said...

awesom!!! ammukutty


She is creativity :)))