Sunday, September 20, 2009

Ammu's First Written Poem







Ammu wrote a Poem today ... Publishing it as it is ..



Do ignore Gramatics ... Poets freedom :)






The Sun is Shining


I saw the Moon



It was very beautiful


Then I like it



Then I went to the space



Then I saw the Alien



I scared and run



Then the Alien catch me



Then I went to the Aliens home












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10 comments:

  1. Ajith PillaiSeptember 20, 2009 at 11:14 PM

    wow!

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  2. JayadevSeptember 21, 2009 at 9:16 AM

    CT

    You don't have to make excuses on her behalf. Ammu is the poet and she has the liberty to say what she wants.

    It's the age of freedom and wonder - a child can imagine just about anything and everything - as we grow older we reduce our choices, become more rigid and lose our imagination.

    Let her mind roam free (sadly Airtel charges ;-)) now.

    I like her connect with all of creation - she says that even the alien had good intentions and took her home!
    Brilliant!

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  3. DeeptaSeptember 22, 2009 at 11:23 PM

    Wow! Talk abt a fervent imagination at work!! I wonder what she did in that alien's house..lol!

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  4. ~moonstruck~September 23, 2009 at 7:45 PM

    way to go ammoose.....

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  5. AnanyaSeptember 30, 2009 at 4:16 PM

    wonderful:) sh has a wild imagination...encourage her to reach for the stars..congratulate her on everything that she writes:) iv her my love:)

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  6. Deepa GopalOctober 4, 2009 at 10:31 PM

    Awsum!!!

    She is Imaginative!!
    Great start, ammu..

    Its so nice when we see our kids on an imaginative journey...which happens many times at my home too..we feel so proud of them:)

    Encourage and reinforce her talents.

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  7. AyyappadasOctober 16, 2009 at 6:41 PM

    The verses from a budding poetess....
    As they pour out conquering the space and time,
    Castles and space crafts get built and destroyed
    Galaxies to magical wands all shrink to one-
    A tiny cute speck of thought;
    A thing of beauty, a joy for ever.

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  8. JayakrishnanNovember 5, 2009 at 7:14 PM

    She is creativity. Like someone said creativity is a learning process where both the teacher and student are the same individual. She is exploring it.

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  9. JayakrishnanNovember 5, 2009 at 7:16 PM

    I meant she is creative.:-)

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  10. UnknownNovember 6, 2009 at 6:33 PM

    awesom!!! ammukutty


    She is creativity :)))

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